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Where the Truth Lies

To-get-her all-ways,
Nevertheless a-way
To have enquarries,
A midst a lighted evening day.

Where the truth lies is held up at bay,
Carrying the weapons that make the sky turn gray
The ring of nothing, among us astray,
A lense growing frothy over a timedless olay.

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  • Poisonous-Kisses
    October 16
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    hmmm...

    I like this... it is very sweet. Short and sweet and to the point. Very good. I Like it...


  • myrataal silver member
    October 13
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    Within the misery and misteries of life ...

    we may find that everlasting speck of joy that will blaze us a Sun.

    May you find that too.

    Love
    Myra


  • KayCeeJane
    October 13
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    very good(:

    i love how you rhymed this one and it flowed very nicely keep up the good work