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silently thinking

silently setting

smelling your fragrance

lingering thoughts

of love

 

and we both held captive

to the enemy of time

 

 

 

 

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  • ceegeeess
    October 28

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    run in love with time!

    Thoughts of love mesmerise time! As long as love is deep, time loses its power. Chasing of love and time are natural. Love remains beyond time ,but time lapses when love wins. Lovely thoughts , sweet Ann!


  • bellagio girl
    October 19

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    Lovely and very profound and thought provoking write here. I love the simplicity of your words, yet there is such a clear message.


  • lost
    October 19
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    very thought provoking, i like it


  • just mercedes gold member
    October 15

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    This made me think - if life is the enemy of time? I like the lingering on thoughts of love - once it's existed it can never be lost entirely.


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    October 14

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    such a sad but enduring emotion running through your words dear one...lost in the memory of a love that once was, held captive by time...just beautiful and niaish for sharing it with me


  • SteveS gold member
    October 13
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    Wow, isn't that the truth. A perspective usually attained in the aftermath. Nicely written.


  • lost
    October 13
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    so few words but so much meaning.. i love it


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    October 13
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    good to know,,you have passion within you x peter


  • crimsondew
    October 13
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    time turns friend and foe on its whim....very well written....


  • poeticweaver gold member
    October 12

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    So much said in few words my friend!
    Time can be your enemy indeed, when in the silent nights left lonely.
    You captured this wonderfully, and it's great to read you once again.

    Much love, Timothy

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