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The Dream

As the sun goes down on another day
I look out at the ocean I've made for myself
An endless journey to a world beyond
The purple hues and dark crimson sky
Beckon to me to come hither
The tide moves me ever so slowly
Towards the never ending horizon
A cool wind wisps through my hair
And kisses my rosy cheeks
A calmness like no other abounds me
This is all so surreal
I can smell the flowers
A promise from the unseen land
And I hear the birds I cannot see.
The blanket of dark shimmers
With the wondrous magic dust
That encapusalates this dream.
I awake and I am with you.
This is heaven...I am free.

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  • Ann45 gold member
    October 14

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    Beautiful

    This is so sweet and fresh, well done and good luck and thanks for entering