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Forever undiscovered

I wish to be forever young,
But inside i can feel my colourful youth turning to shades of grey,
Although a rose is still as sweet,
And the sky still blue each day,
I am still longing for something deeper,
For something to enlighten me as to what my life has accomplished,
I feel as though i walked this road to many times,
And still searching for a piece of me which has yet to be demolished,
Maybe my path has not been discovered,
And forever shall i wonder what could have been,
This is a mystery, forever undiscovered.

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