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Ode to Dave

Renewed rememberance
Of loving you
Teases me

If only
Skin on skin
I could
please thee

Over sorrow
And pain
Your love
Agrees with me

Grab on and
Don't let go
My love desires
to seize thee

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  • Angel-of-Chaos
    November 6
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    Lovely write, very lovely! It is full of passion and love. Great write!


  • Arkbear gold member
    October 13
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    .....you have not lost your quills beautiful strokes.....ever so gentle and reminding of good things.....blessings,

     

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