A thousand prayers prayed
and just with one glance
I knew that the answer was yes
Every window reflected his presence
no matter what direction I turned
I would see him
I no longer felt the need to give up -
Author notes
Prompt - all i could see were the pastels in his eyes ~ by K.Stachurski
A contest entry
- quickie! by Kathraina.
460 points, ended October 13, 8 entries
Silver trophy winner
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This is absolutely beautiful. You did an excellent job.
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BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!
No one is making this easy.
Brilliant take on the prompt, these words are simply amazing
bravo and thank you for entering
♥ kate -
oh excellent! I love the part about knowing yes was the answer and the last line about not giving up; yes, those are my favorite parts, the parts that speak out to me
pen on, and good luck in the contest!! Your welcome for not spamming!
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Now this is nice. I love how you let the words speak, and paint the picture for the scene that was happening. Best of luck with it in the contest.
Riftkin
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nicely donee !
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I really liked this. Damn, all the entries in this contest tonight are good.
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