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Husband of Mine

It was the most beautiful dream
I had it three years ago
but I remember it now
as though it were yesterday

It was the most beautiful day
filled with sunshine
the birds were chirping
a sweet honey scent

It was the most beautiful sight
us, sitting at a picnic
with two boys and a girl
and you were my husband

And God was smilin' down
watchin' over us
breathing down our necks with warmth
as our family was a testament
to how much I loved you


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At least how much I used to love him.

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  • Kendal Palmer gold member
    October 23

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    beautiful...full of heartfelt emotion and great imagery! Nice job here poet!! thanks for sharing it. keep up the great work!!
    peace and light,
    kendal