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Horse and woman

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Horse and woman become one
Day in day out
Black as a raven calm as a summer day
his trust is in her
no fear she only rides the Stud
challenge
born on the back of a horse
mares are just no fun
Know such pairing up gives it best
when going south
for today's cowgirl
takes little rest.
riding lessons, trail cutting, haying,
boarding, showing, breeding...
never ending list.





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Throwdown to my friend word weaver oh I could not resist. whats in your mind now cowboy?

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  • awannabepoet
    October 14

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    This piece makes me want to jump out of my city snickers and head out to the country. Gosh it reminded me of that time I went riding back in Colorado, it was just awesome being out and about on a horse.

    Thank you for sharing your great talent and please forgive me for taking so darn long to return the favor.


    • Rheea gold member
      October 14
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      come on down you can ride with us..

      • awannabepoet
        October 14
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        I am certain it would be awesome, this crazy cold weather up here is causing the blues already and the season has not even really started.

        Thank you so very much for your most generous and kind offer, that is really sweet of you.


  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    October 14

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    Beautifully done Sis...

    A stirring narrative with great imagery & depth that flows with grace & reflects a subject that is clearly dear to your heart...
    Impressive as always...
    Keep up the good work...
    Well done!!!


  • Dixie Dawn gold member
    October 13
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    Spoken like a true cowgirl, and I love it!


  • parenchma
    October 13

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    it s time I went riding again. Last time was at St. Johns ranch. Gosh. Its been better than ten years...the horse ran and when I tried to slow him I realized I could go strait off the front. How do you keep from doin that? The next day I was sore. You remember how bacon looks? And it is from the pig's belly. Well my belly.... How do I say this... I could feel the red streaks!

    • Rheea gold member
      October 13
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      hello moon .. oh my you turn small circles best not to run before you walk love you have me laughing.. lu lu you may go off the side before you do the front unless you come to a very abrupt halt ...come ride in the moon light


  • ennovy silver member
    October 13

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    Nothing like a stallion at full speed when you let him have the lead, you blend together just the wind, waves. He knows you are there, when he leaps over the fence and you are one. You are the wings, that control the flight. "Oh what a feeling!" It makes all the labor to care for him worth every minute of toil. An excellent write......novy


    • Rheea gold member
      October 13
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      lets ride novy lets ride race you to the creek lu

  • celadia
    October 13

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    such tough women, they beat Laura Tombcroft all to heck.


    • Rheea gold member
      October 13
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      yea celadia come on .. you have to learn to clean stalls too .


  • Camille Morin gold member
    October 13

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    Sounds so exciting! Great piece!

  • Bob Fox
    October 13

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    Yes!

    You go cowgirl. May it always be so. Perhaps the wonder of your words can resonate across the country...Cowgal style.


    • Rheea gold member
      October 13

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      Hello Bob.. one of the reasons I adore you darlin you know the female heart.


  • west-word
    October 12

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    Lol... nice answer to my poem "Horse and Man"
    I bow down to the master..or is that mistress?? lmao.

    • Rheea gold member
      October 12
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      why thank you we cowgirls just do not like to be left out...... and we are a lot in books and movies and well you get my emotional drift..

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