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....Try

...and if I never make it -
never reach my heart's desire -
it will not be from lack of effort or a fear of climbing higher.
For I have stretched with all my might toward the endless sky,
and if I never reach the moon, at least I've learned to fly.

The journey is it's own reward -
the destiny a passing thing,
and if I never learn to fly at least I've learned to sing.

And if I never make it -
never tread the Golden Path -
no, if I never learn to sing at least I've learned to laugh.

And if I never make it -
I will have no need to cry -
for I can say with satisfaction, "At least I've learned to try!"

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Written April 10th, 2004

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  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    April 13, 2008

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    Good description of trying, With every attempt we always learn something new as you said! And its bettter to fly than not try aat all!

  • KayMMIV
    April 11, 2004
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    i love this, it is so hopefilled and gives off such a great feeling. the opposit of almost doesn't count! beautiful, i really love this!


  • 68stingray
    April 11, 2004
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    Inspirationally amazing. This will really get you to thinking. You did a wonderful job on this one. Never be afraid to try.


  • Dawnknight
    April 10, 2004
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    Speaks Volumes

    Wow truth in a few simple lines, reminds me of those nursrey rymes that keep repeating the sentence before it but adds on after. I love this it is sweet and says so much about just the idea of reaching for a goal. Great job. Good luck in the contest, honorable competitor.


  • AMoonOnMyWings
    April 10, 2004
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    Very Well Done

    I think this is the best poem I've read on here. Thak you for writing such and inspirational peice!


  • shadesofnothing
    April 10, 2004
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    hey I like this and it speaks of truth! I wish more could think this way the world might be a brighter place. Great job
    Shades

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