am i alone?
i still don't know.
but i feel as though
i am alone
i sit in my room
and read a book
it occupies my depression for a moment
but then i feel my emptiness again
and i wonder to myself
am i alone?
i wonder if anyone will miss me
i wonder what it would be like to be dead
i wonder how other people would deal with my stress
are other people's lives going in the direction of the devil?
or are their lives picked up by an angel
in a pity case
and saved before hitting the fiery pits
and then my mind strays from the subject
and the subject finds its way back in my mind
like a dog, to its home.
am i alone?
What did you think
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Since a person cannot live without affecting the lives of other people around them, then they can never be alone.
You've put this question well, expanding it into many words, forming the whole picture, as definedand solid as a marble statue.
Well done
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thank you :)
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if no one else would miss you i would! i love this poem... everyone has a moment like this but few catch it and make it into something beautiful like a poem
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thank you. :)
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No
I'm here. But I guess since I relate to this poem it wouldn't make sense for the blind to lead the blind along.... -
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:)
and thats why your my best friend. sux tho that wer in diff high schools. but at leeast they r right next to each other right? anywayzz
love ya bri.
~kelso
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