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...Beautiful Nightmare....

As I'm laying here dreaming about you
and all the the things we used to do
fantasy seem so true....
but in life I'm sad lonely and blue


All the things i heard are coming true....

I dont know what the hell to do...

I'm lost in love, i thought you were my angle from above..

I thought I was the only girl you loved..

But with all the lies...for me it's time to say my....

 

.....GOOD-BYE......

 

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  • AAA Taurus The Bull gold member
    October 13

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    Good

    this is a very insightful and telling. piece two words well done. This poem shows and illusions of the life of love e. very imaginative. I love the content and images. smooth readingI Alexander QQ....



  • cinderella girl
    October 13
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    wow i no that u are hurtring i can feel it

  • Marcia gold member
    October 12
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    Been there. Done that. It stinks. The awakening is the worst, but saying good-bye will start the healing. Hang in there.


  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    October 12

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    I've had those dreams. You lose someone then dream about still being with them. Wake up and reality hits you hard I'm sorry this happened. Great job on the poem.


    -Steve-


  • Mr Hutchins
    October 12
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    hope that wasnt bout me


    • SeXyBabyGirl21
      October 18
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      NO THIS POEM WAS NOT ABOUT YOU BABY THIS POEM WAS ABOUT NOBODY THE WORDS WAS JUST COMMING TO ME....

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