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A Story of Life, In 3 Parts

i.

i love to travel.
shuffling my feet along the perforated lines,
longing to be folded in to the atmosphere;
but i like questions to much for that.

ii.

Dan is my dance partner.
Divorced and finally living at 50;
heartbeats are lost and found in our footsteps,
and birds take flight when he spins me.
I like being free.

iii.

My drink of choice is orange juice,
laced with laughter and class.
It's a drink to sweet for most,
but one I want to share with you.

Come,
drink with me

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Written about three weeks ago. This is more how I'm feeling today. I like this one

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  • Lowell Poe
    October 24

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    Well your not the only one lass...
    i like this one too...

    My drink of choice is orange juice,
    laced with laughter and class.
    It's a drink to sweet for most,
    but one I want to share with you.

    there is such a spirit of freedom in your work,
    a longing to share your beautiful lens
    in which you look at life with a great poetic sense of wonder.
    Intriguing title makes this so special lass,
    just like you.

    Bless your heart
    little gypsy,
    Liam


    • Alive4aLiving
      October 25
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      I do, I am always telling stories about my day
      and trying to share what I've seen or am seeing with people
      and so few people ever understand let alone see what I am seeing.
      It makes me really happy that you figured that out about me!

      i really have missed talking to you,
      thank you so much for reading this one.

      Love ya,
      Joyce

  • Montey silver member
    October 13

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    Made me realise I'M getting nearer to drinking that orange juice and one day I hope to taste that laughter.Loved this.Montey