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Platypus

So, my friends... I have a story for you.
What story you ask? It is about a magical bong.

This is the bong that never ends,
Yes, it rips on and on my friends.
Some people started smoking it not knowing what it was,
And they'll be high forever just because;

This is the bong that never ends,
Yes, it rips on and on my friends.
Some people started smoking it not knowing what it was,
And they'll be high forever just because;

This is the bong that never ends,
Yes, it rips on and on my friends.
Some people started smoking it not knowing what it was,
And they'll be high forever just because...

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  • Creed Trees silver member
    December 2
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    Haha, this was a nice poem. The only problem with it is now you got that stupid song stuck in my head! Why?!! Damn now I need to come up with at least 100 more words to type in order to get this comment to count for top commenter award. What does Platypus mean? So, I didn't learn until yesterday or the day before what a bong was. I was reading a book and it said it in it and then I went and asked my dad and he was all what friend of yours has a bong? Anyways nice write and great song I guess.


  • morphis78
    November 8
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    Clever

    hahaha....something we might all be able to relate to on a weird level...


  • Not-The-Sun
    November 3

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    Some people started smoking it not knowing what it was,
    And they'll be high forever just because;



    hilarious satire
    you're brilliant.


  • Andi.
    October 20

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    I agree with Amelias comment



    Oh and in the words of Bliss n Eso "All aboard the choof choof train, hit it left, hit it right brother use that flame. All aboard the choof choof train, turn it up in your speakers let the music bang, All aboard the choof choof train, toot toot mother fucker, Mary Jane's my name. All aboard the choof choof train, what you smokin' on brother, that good shit man."


    this is awesome. well done rocy


  • blueyez
    October 20

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    hahahaha nice you so silly... I love it


  • Crazychook
    October 20

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    In the words of Hilltop Hoods "Australian hip-hop, but not kangaroo."

    Oh and in the words of Bliss n Eso "All aboard the choof choof train, hit it left, hit it right brother use that flame. All aboard the choof choof train, turn it up in your speakers let the music bang, All aboard the choof choof train, toot toot mother fucker, Mary Jane's my name. All aboard the choof choof train, what you smokin' on brother, that good shit man."


    Also they said "When I hit a bong I'm going to Willy Wonka's elevator." Good song.


  • Rejected Easter Egg
    October 20
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    How strange creative though


  • Anubis
    October 19
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  • Salt Therapy
    October 19
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    random XD

  • Not-The-Sun
    October 12
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    I LOVE THE FISH!!!!!

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