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you.

you live somewhere that I've never been.

it's a beautiful place, where stars are bright
and children's eyes are brighter
and words can fly as freely as badminton birdies.

your ocean eyes tell me a story I can't exactly decipher,
but it mentions me and says a whole lot about you
and I want to know what you're really feeling.

something about the way you move
the things you catch in your sneaky glances at me from across the room
the way you wink, slowly and deliberately

it makes me smile.

and your smile...your smile lights up the room
your shining white teeth that glisten on even the darkest night
and how you make faces when you think no one's watching.

sometimes I wonder if you dream about me, too.

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  • who iam
    October 26

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    A personal touch ;"when he makes faces when you think no one is watching"
    Great imagery throughout your write.
    Full of love that appears unknown by the other one!
    Nicely done.


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    October 13

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    so sweet

    beautifully written

    God bless you my friend...