You say you care
i say i see through those lies
i can see into those sad, cold, spiritless eyes.
You say you care
I know its not true
for if you really cared, you would be able to say i love you.
You say you care
but i see through that little mask
and bask
in the glory of knowing your true side
that you hide from everyone else
You say you care
but i know, within my heart, its not true
i can see your real side
i see that your minds askew.
its something you can hide
but not from me
Because i know the real you.
You say you care
i say i see through your lies
its because i can see into those sad, cold, spiritless eyes.
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I like the repitition to this. It empthasises the confusion uncertainty doubt and pain of it all. Best of luck x
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Wow
I never knew you were such a poet missy!!!! this was simply....amazing....just...wow! i love it lots
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haha
thank you, lol i knew u were a poet since i first saw u miss lol, well actually, i just thought u'd be a funny artist. but i was also correct on that right?! lol
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