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Promises Unbroken

My pleasure in having the man I adore

look into mine eyes,and whisper to me,

I deeply love you for who you are...not

for what you expect me to look and with much

hesitance.

That he accepts me for me and never reflects on stuff

in the past, and never questions,why!

To me that is my heart,soul, and everything in between.

How lucky I am and he knows he is too, smiling as he reads

and agrees he has me in the palm of his hands,as I do him.

Every degree of wanting to share...those promises kept...

and lovingly accepted as he does in return...

True Love of a man I loved for so long..

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  • A beautiful poem by a beautiful person. It is apparent in you words


  • Cyber Artist Moderators member
    November 2

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    This has a such a youthful feel of first love, playful yet grounded. well constructed and focused on the one person very intense well done
    Cyber Artist


  • who iam
    October 26
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    Knowing you have found that special one in your live is well expressed in your write.
    He is a fortunate man!
    God bless...


  • BluRosePoet8488
    October 15
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    Very beautifully written. I adore this piece. Thanks for sharing and keep the ink flowing. Good luck!
    ~Donna~

  • This is a beautiful piece.
    It's such a great thing when one finds true love.


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    October 13

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    true love is effortless, it is accepting and embracing

    it appears you know this already

    very lovely to read...

    God bless you my friend...

     


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    October 12

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    excellent~

    I enjoyed the read and the poem
    And spoken all so true
    Best of luck in the contest
    I just posted a new one hope you come visit me
    Hugs
    Susan~~~

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