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We Are Woven

The warp and the woof of the Masters loom
Weave us together and making us one
Like a beautiful flower in full bloom
Or as a baby is woven in it's mothers womb

Each thread may be fragile as lovers of't are 
Woven together we become strong as the Wind
That buffets us daily from near and afar
Our tapestry love will endure to the end

(Zen U Vil B Mein Frauh 4evfer)
Haaaaaaaaaaaaa Haaaaaaaaaaaaa


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Contest poem by Dobar Dan -

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  • Hikari Lady
    November 2

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    That's beautiful!!! Truely, I liked where you took the prompt and how deep your words were. (The last line gave me a chuckle )
    Thanks for entering and good luck.

    Love
    ~Noor

    • Dobar Dan
      November 2
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      U Vil Not Chuckle Ven I Koght U - haaa haaa haaa

      Thanks for the compliment and applause dear Princess Noor - I know - I know - I havent been stalking you - sorry mein little vun - be of good cheer - be afraid - you stalker is near - haaa haaa haaa - Joe - dobar dan ---------------------------- hugs


  • condor gold member
    October 21

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    This is georgous and really speaks to me. I used some similar words in a poem and you have shown that no matter how many times these particualr words are used, they will always hold their own special significance that draws the heart out. Great write.


  • Lulu Gee silver member
    October 13

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    Beautiful poem Joe, some scientist eh?
    A very clever poem I think and one that
    I very much enjoyed reading.
    Good luck in the contest - hugs -


  • Life is a Beach gold member
    October 12

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    This is a very nice write from you my friend!
    This doesn't sound like the Scientist poet...this is sweet and as Pisces Rainbow said...soulful!

    • Dobar Dan
      October 12
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      It is a little scientific - lol -

      I wrote a poem some time ago called "The warp and the woof" - was nothing like this one - can't even find it - thanks for the comment and compliment and applause Pam - Bless God - Joe - dobar dan --------------------------------------------- hugs

    • Dobar Dan
      October 12
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      Well Thanks Pam


  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    October 12
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    Like a beautiful flower in full bloom

    quite a soft soulful write Joe

    beautifully written

    God bless you my friend...

    • Dobar Dan
      October 12
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      Thank You My Dear

      Thanks for the comment/compliment and applause - Bless God - Joe - dobar dan -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- peace


  • Stickboy gold member
    October 12
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    what a beautiful poem my friend... I am so glad I stopped to read it today
    Best of luck in the contest
    Sean

    • Dobar Dan
      October 12
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      Well Thank you My Friend

      Thanks for the for the compliment and applause and for stopping by to read it - the background is like the piece of cloth woven - the warp and the woof entwined - would be nice if mankind would be woven together in love - Bless God - Joe - dobar dan --------------------------------------------------------------- peace

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