I spent a lifetime
searching for love
Hoping for the one thing
that I've always dreamt of.
You're the star
who lit up my sky
Brought life to my heart
that I can't deny.
I never thought I'd find
someone so true
The day we talked I knew
that God gave me you.
A contest entry
- God Gave Me You by Heavenly Angel.
575 points, ended October 16, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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sometimes it takes a while for some to know that this is the person that was made for them. i hope that i will find that person one day, but you never really know, keep it flowing
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Wow.
This sounds like an amazing feeling.
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amazing
i love this poem so much. this is how i feel about my bf...awwww its so great when u fall in love. good poem keep up the good work
ashley
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"The day we talked I knew
that God gave me you." that was so beautiful. I loved it. Great job on this poem and best of luck to you in the contest.
-Steve-
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How amazing beautiful (if you don't know this is MJ)
Good to see you are happy!!! Beautiful poem
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this is sweet and you write so well
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Awe sweet and caring and very well written I wish one day a guy might feel this way about me
Searra
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How very beautiful this is!
Sigh...
I LOVE love poems and this is a fine piece!
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck to you!!!
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