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That Voice

His voice lingers

hauntingly

like a soul

needing to cross over

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Prompt:Ghost
11 words

A contest entry

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  • Rick Weston silver member
    October 14
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    nice use of the prompt.

    good luck in the contest.


  • islekine gold member
    October 13

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    I enjoyed this very much!

    And understood exactly what you were saying!
    I love ghost tales...thanks!
    Best wishes in the contest and always! Write on and on...

    and


  • Iliad Keys
    October 12

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    Hmmm good start. It's too bad that this prompt is only 11 words long. It just begs an explanation. But that's fine in a way, because I think one useful thing about literature is in raising questions and then failing to answer them. Some see this as crime. I see it as a way to get the reader thinking deeper and longer than if the answer were handed to them. Sorry, that's a lot of philosophy to take out of 11 words! Good job. ~Iliad Keys