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I can't....

I can’t wake up…
I can’t wake up from this dream
I can’t get away from these images
I can’t see the light of day as it tries to draw me away
I can’t hear the voices calling my name

I can’t escape this feeling
I can’t avoid my mind
I can’t pull myself out of this nightmare
I can’t save myself this time.

I can’t fall asleep…
I can’t fall asleep, the day won’t let me be
I can’t stop the noise and the sounds that surround me
I can’t release these feelings, these aches and pains
I can’t stop my mind from driving sleep away

I can’t escape these thoughts
I can’t escape the fray
I can’t get away from the never ending day

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I've been feeling lost in this in between... Another piece that doesn't feel finished but I have nothing else to add. Thoughts?

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