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When night falls...

Oh the bliss of darkness
The cool fingers of the night
The easy breeze that makes the tree branches sway

Blessed darkness that washes away the ugliness of the day
Silent stillness the drives the headaches away
The dark void that sucks the echoing madness from the day

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  • Mango Memories gold member
    November 3
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    i like the imagry you have in this. It flows really well in the mind.