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A Lovers Veins On Fire (Challenge 1/Quendeca Form)

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Leather straps to hold a lover in place

a pair of silken thongs damp with desire

Bound and gagged, a lovers veins on fire

and luscious lips leave a path on his face

Silver chains dangle beneath her attire

and soft moans become a lovers embrace

 

Lipstick is long lasting, mascara stains

as her hungry lips swallow head to base

Pleasures rising as she tugs silver chains

as his taste buds enjoy the sweetest lace

Light brown spirals are used as her reigns

as she starts grinding at a heated pace

 

Eyes of acceptance are pleading for more

to travel the trail to passions smooth core

allowing soft fingertips to explore...

~@~~@~~@~~@~~@~~@~

 

 

Leaning forth with cherry lips upon skin

teeth are marking the spot of her desire

Sinking down lightly he can feel the fire

and excitement starts to stir deep within

Passionately two souls indulge in sin

as two well heated bodies shall never tire

 

Temperatures boiling and she needs much more

his throbbing member buried deep in her

Unstrapping the restraints of her hot lover

he assumes position, tongue licks her core

and eyes become misty, she starts to purr

as he feasts on her and fingers explore...

 

Putting her on all fours, he pushes in,

throbbing excitement, as nails streak warm skin

Burying deep.... he releases within

 

Author notes

GROUP CHALLENGE ONE: Dancing in the Flames of Desire

Griswold [Dancing in the Flames of Desire] You want a challenge Lady Passions? Write a double Quindeca using rhyme scheme abbaba cdcdcd eee in the first with fggffg hiihih jjj in the last sensually. Not using the words cock,balls, cunt, pussy, clit, tits. Syllable count is your choice, man/woman, woman/woman, or man/man your choice as well.

Form specifics here:
http://allpoetry.com/column/show/2355289

Rhyme scheme given to me: abbaba cdcdcd eee fggffg hiihih jjj

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  • sometimes i don't think i should be reading your poems first thing in the morning that always put thoughts in my head, that shouldn't be there till the afternoon, lol, loving it, keep it flowing


  • Swangrnv gold member
    October 13

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    good great goonies!

    WOW, again and again you deliver the heat, this one just about burned down my house!! good thing i had my 'fire extinguisher' at the ready to hose that baby down! l.o.l. yeah ..very hot and excellent flow as always Tory..


  • JohnnyD gold member
    October 12

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    I could write a number of words to try and describe the perfection of this piece but I believe it actually boils down to just one word; WOW!


    lovely indeed, in the never subtle Passion's way.

    sweet love

    Len


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    October 12

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    wow girl you have penned the fire on the page to burn any soul ablaze and sing the sexuality of life between two lovers in heavenly delight stunning dear one as always many hugs love always Angel♥


  • Griswold silver member
    October 12

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    Now this is what I call a Quindeca!!! Damn baby, I knew you could do it justice... hang on I need to de-fog my glasses.... Ok, now that the initial hard.... er, I mean impression has passed, you followed the rhyme scheme perfectly as given you in the challenge. This is wonderfully done and smoking hot as only you can do it love. I love you... Scott


  • cricketjeff gold member
    October 12

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    Bloody hot stuff in Scott's new form

    The content has stripped all the phosphors off my monitor!

    Great stuff

    Love

    Jeff

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