a kiss upon his virgin lips
the feeling of his soft
skin, up against my cold cheek
the quietness soon fades away
all that can be heard is the
heavy breathing shared between the
two of us and soon it grows loud.
not but 17 years old
and still has all the living
in his life to do
so far, has kept to himself
he whispers and tells me
that i am the first
he lusts over the touch
of my fingertips on his stomach
and the breathing down his neck
the smell of my skin
and the sound of my voice
and wants to do more
after a while, he realizes
that he has lost his innocence.
Author notes
i was bored and don't think its good at all, but eh, who cares
whatcha think??
Comments
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hey this is awsome i like it great job hun!
xox ellie
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the smell of my skin
and the sound of my voice
and wants to do more
after a while, he realizes
that he has lost his innocence.
Wow...that's great. A wonderful way to lose a treasure -
an awesome write!
The first time is almost always great!
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holly shit i love it
i fucking love this!!!!! its awesome... haha dude is only 17 but still awesome wright
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