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To My Diary xxx

Dear Diary,
I was the happiest soul in the world yesturday, but today my heart broke into fractured pieces.  There was a beautiful baby, a precious soul growing inside me yesturday, but today it went away.  Today I had a miscarriage and lost a beautiful part of my future.  If only i hadn't known I was pregnant, it would have been better, but i did know, i knew of my Angel inside. 
I stood helpless as an uncontrollable flow of blood gushed from within me.  My tears in motion with my miscarriage.  It took a while to believe it had gone, it took a while to feel again, but when I did, I wished I was numb again.  I feel so sad, but I needed to tell someone of my pain, my tears, my sadness xxx

Scarlet xxx

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  • This is a very touching diary entry. My heart goes out to you. I hope that writing about it helps you.

    Mike


  • PsychoAnalysis
    October 14

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    I am so sorry for your loss hunni, I am sorry that your life was brightned, and then darkness overcame it. I am sorry you are feeling this hurt, and I am sorry that the hope you had for a life inside of you is gone. I am here for you, if you need someone to talk to, even if you need to cry...I am here, and God is here, and your lost baby is here, all hugging you and giving you their warmth. We all want you to get better. You have my condolences.


  • dr3a-martin3z
    October 14

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    GREAT WRITE FROM THE HEART

    I KNOW HOW U FEEL....MAN, IT NEVER GOES AWAY.....THAT FEELING, BUT UR BABY, AND THE BABY I LOST ARE BOTH WITH GOD, SO THEY ARE IN GOOD HANDS....AND THIS REALLY TOUCHED MY HEART!!!


  • amnouup
    October 13
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    Very touching

    Your this poem in the form of prose is very touching, May God bless you!
    Take care

  • LadyReba
    October 12

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    Beautiful, yet haunting...

    From one mother to another... I understand, and believe in your pain. It was mine once... You will have another, but know this will never be the same...
    My prayerrs are with you and your angel...

  • I'm so sorry this happened to you


  • Sweet-Sins
    October 12
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    aww this is sad. nice write!
    x

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