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Bipolar Bitch

Should I hold the knife here?
Stick it in and stab you there?
Will it hurt if I play with your heart?
All I'm going to do is tear it apart
I'm telling you my master plan
I'll cause you pain just because I can
I want to make you cry and bleed
Just prove to myself that I can succeed
I will put you through all this hell
But remember babe I love you I mean well
I just want you to suffer a bit
Scream with agony while I throw a fit
So take it all with a huge and loving smile
This bitchy behaviour will last only a while
But don't worry my darling you'll get the last kiss
You I'll think about when I need someone to miss
I'll go back to the love you can't explain
Until I start bitching all over again

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  • GiveMeGreatness
    October 24
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    ahahaha i am SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO DOIN THIS OVER!!............bipolar pimp ahaha lol


  • Stripes
    October 19
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    Oh my gosh.. so mean... but i seriously, love this poem...so so so much. ur too much talent to handle..lol


  • briannaellis601
    October 18
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    wow i love this. it kind of explain a girl is having one of her days...


  • savemysoul
    October 15

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    "will it hurt if i play with your heart?
    all i'm going to do is tear it apart."

    i loved this !


  • catz Moderators member
    October 14

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    I know a few people who are bipolar and your poem is right on. A good write, very upfront and honest.

    Dee


  • Poetic Butterfly
    October 12

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    I love the truth behind this, because in reality everyone has a little bipolar in them

    "I want to make you cry and bleed
    Just prove to myself that I can succeed
    I will put you through all this hell
    But remember babe I love you I mean well"

    Because we know we can be a bitch we do....so I love this part Nice write

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