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Dying

Love and hate eating me alive
draining my blood
making my poetry shine
like a beautiful flower
under the black sky

Author notes

5. Word Bank (must use all 5 words)
flower
poetry
hate
blood
love

My mind is on other things...

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  • zhaniswolf
    October 12

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    Yeah what the poet underneath said. That's what I was thinking too. Thank you for entering and good luck.


  • Antipodi
    October 12

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    wow such a powerful write dear poet ...from the ashes of darkness rises the beauty of creative imagery and love