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a body of lies.



on a park bench along manchester ave, I
dry heaved over the tired skin of a lover's
breath, tore from edges to pile against
the non-conforming branches of a word.

stark visages compiled wholes by the write
on barstools angels play the tune of Sodom
now swore to the pleasure-fest of eternity's collapse
I digressed, by the tonic of sylvia's blade.

winter's blowing, the seasonal whore goddess is bending
lips spread, thighs wide demanding a fevered plunge of
thought upon thought, spewed from the ethers of a promised
regret we all face, when the page is defiled.

today my desk is over-run by the shards of servitude, blank
heart and mind delivering to the continuum of
a poet's vise, who and why leaning precariously close to
the belief eyes are watching, enthralled.

yet the pretense shudders, ink drains the vessel, down
isles worms gather to forage the root, I
reverberate with the voice of old ghosts, the ones
compelling dissension amongst the ranks, of gods.









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  • Pisces rainbow gold member
    October 22

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    To know ourselves

     

    to go so deep and bring to the service...

    most are afraid of what they find

     

    profound

     

    written through the soul of a true Poet

     

    exquisite

     

    God bless you my friend...

     

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  • Rend the Veil gold member
    October 17

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    wow this is so moving!
    I love this and it is such powerful write

    love and blessings

    Rend


  • Edie gold member
    October 15

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    “winter's blowing, the seasonal whore goddess is bending
    lips spread, thighs wide demanding a fevered plunge of
    thought upon thought, spewed from the ethers of a promised
    regret we all face, when the page is defiled.

    my desk is over-run by the shards of servitude, blank
    heart and mind delivering the continuum of
    a poet's vise, who and why lean precariously close to
    the belief eyes are watching, enthralled.”

    Everytime I read this. I am so drawn to these two stanzas.

    They touch something in me and bring to mind so many thoughts.
    There are touches of the victim-redeemer, the need of and lack of...belief.
    The constant internal struggle we all have in finding the creative process within us. By creative I don’t necessarily mean poetry either. I mean the parts of us that really need something. That intangible something. A form of creative healing one could call it.

    Then of course you top it off by writing this in your unique Rob style which makes it all the more powerful.


  • Amera gold member
    October 12

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    This is dark and painful yet I still found it captivating with wonderful original imagery. Bravo!

    Love,
    Amera