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My last Goodbye

Sitting with a bottle in my hand
and a gun to my head
looking back on my shattered life
A life full of pain

As tears stream down my face
I ask myself:
"What did I do wrong?"
I will soon be gone

You tried to pick up the pieces
of my broken heart
and put 'em together
Go back to the start

I knew from the beginning
that it wouldn't succeed
I had already lost
both my hope and my soul

Now the pain has overcome
my will to carry on
I'm tired of being down
and over and over
I still hit ground

I'm so sick of all this lies
that I see in your eyes
tomorrow when I'm gone
the sun will still rise

I love you and I'm sorry.
But this is my last goodbye

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  • Gothikitten13
    October 12

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    datz rlly touchin cuz smetimes u neva know wat u did wrong. But the only way u know z wen u know u did it, So say good-bye all u want cause dat person will regret eva lieing in ur eyes. Now they will hve 2 see dat sun rise alone.