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You are my dream

Under that divine harmony
Bewitching and melodious
Of your beautiful blue eyes

And of your enchanting lips
Which softly whisper to me
Theirs sweet words of love

I dream of you, night & day
Through my velvety dreams
That disappear like a rainbow

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