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For Millie.

I cant stop these tears,
the tears that fall for you.

I know your sad, oh so sad,
But if we stick together maybe,
we can re-create what you had.

Happyness, peace and joy,
everything you had with him.

All you have to remember is,
I'm here for you, no matter what,

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  • GothicFyre
    October 12

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    Awww, that was so sweet and sensitive. I liked the beautiful simplicity of it, a tender piece. Great writing I found it to be brilliant.