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Beautifully Golden.

Your beautifully golden hair.
Swaying in the wind.
As you run towards.
As the sun hit you hair,
I swear I saw halo above your head.

Your ocean blues eyes.
Brighter than anyone else.
As you look into my eyes.
My knees begin to shake.
Looking into your eyes
I swear there is someone swimming there.

Your rose red lips.
Curving around mine perfectly.
The softest lips ever.
As you lip touch, my heart skips a beat.
I swear I saw you give your rose red lips to someone else.

Your ruby red heart.
More giving than anyone else.
As you lay quiet,
I heard your heart beating.
I swear she told me that you loved her with your ruby red heart.

Your Soft peach like hands.
Traces down my throat,
Past shoulder down towards my hips.
I feel shivering down my spine.
As your soft peach like hands.
Reach down to my hips,
I swear I heard you say “baby, I am sorry, but my soft peach like hand have touched the body of another.”

Tell me I hearing things ?
Tell me I seeing things ?
Tell me its no true ?

Be honesty. please.

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  • GothicFyre
    October 12

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    Change the text colour so it can be easier read, but other than that it was great. Lovely sentiments, just change the text colour. Beautiful.


    • Memmy-94
      October 12
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      Thanks for commenting.
      And i changed the colour to dark blue.