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Sentiment and Sensibility

feelings

feelings I can't bear to let go of

the sweet scent I was never meant to smell

eyes like gemstones in sunlight

laughter

I felt -in a word- special

the memories flood back like a happiness that is just out of reach
wishing more then anything that I could go back to that place
maybe then it would have been different

heartache

heartache I can't hold on to

sleepless nights spent with teary eyes

words both confusing and frustrated

emptiness

I felt -in a word- broken

The only way I could find the light
the light that I remember so clearly now
was to brave the darkness




Author notes

this is about a friend of mine, an almost romance that never quite happened. I was too young to understand it fully and at the time it hurt like hell. But all I can think of now is what fun we had. Those were some really good times that seem stained with the tears that fallowed.

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  • george the 23rd
    November 5
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