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if you let me..

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i'd wrap you up in cotton wool, place you in a little box covered in glitter and put you in my pocket

i'd keep you safe, secure, warm and content...

i'd cuddle and kiss you as much as you need and never, ever let you feel unloved

i'd work so hard to give you the life you want and deserve

i'd shelter you from the rain

i'd protect you from all harm

i'd rub your head at night to help you fall to sleep

i'd rub your back when it caused you pain

i'd even wash your dirty undies without wearing rubber gloves

i'd learn how to lift your spirits when you felt down

i'd make love to you 5 times a day

i'd cook your favourite meals

i'd write you love songs

i'd punch anyone in the face if they did anything to hurt you...

i'd love you more than you realised you could be loved

i'd give up everything

i'd make you happy

.....



i would adore you...

if only you'd let me

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artwork by eveline tarunadjaja

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  • Daizee silver member
    October 23
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    isn't there something just totally dreamy about having your head rubbed ?


  • Cup-a-Joe
    October 14

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    Who could ever want anything more? This is beautiful. Simply beautiful.
    Just like you.

    Joe


  • blueyez
    October 12

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    I'll let you!
    *crawls into lyrics' pocket*
    This was so cute and shows just how deeply you love dearheart!


  • Ms.Daydream
    October 12

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    The first point drew me in from the start. The dirty undies one was rather amusing. Aw, of course he'll let you after he reads this! =)


  • charcoal
    October 12

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    he'd be a fool not to let you.


    this is adorable


  • Matt E. Smith gold member
    October 12
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    5 times a day? sounds good to me


  • The Silent-Artisan
    October 12

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    If any man that reads this poem doesn't realize you just appealed to every single sense in their brain/body then they have some handicap. Any woman who reads this poem that doesn't think "this is how I should treat my man if I want a good one." then they are just a damn fool. Another simplistic but beautiful poem from you.

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