"the wind is too complex sweet love
it cannot hold you in its heart
for moments only in its arms
the weight of love is far too much
always letting go, blowing forward
the wind is so complex my love
always chasing what it cannot have
always wanting, never knowing
water cannot help but drift to it
always falling back to earth in tears"
the wind has found my heart again
throwing it where it pleases
never caring how it breaks
falling shattered from its grasp
and just as before, alone i fall
the wind only knows how to go on
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Beautifully distressing. I loved this piece, and felt all of its emotions that you portrayed in it.
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A fine, fine and bittersweet poem with superb, really superb meter throughout the poem.... just a wonderful write no matter how you look at it. Loved it!!
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Welcome to AllPoetry!
There is sadness in your words, but wind is often change and that can sometimes be good too. A lot of metaphor here. Interesting to see how you personally view these aspects of nature in relation to yourself. Well written.
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Keep expressing through writing.
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