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Evening Shadows Fall

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Evening shadows fall, evening shadows fall;
Evening shadows fall, evening shadows fall;
See the moon rise through the trees, feel the chill of a timeless breeze;
See the moon rise through the trees, feel the chill of a timeless breeze;
Evening shadows fall, evening shadows fall;
Evening shadows fall, evening shadows fall.

Build the fire bright, build the fire bright;
Build the fire bright, build the fire bright;
Watch the embers dart and fly, join the stars up in the sky;
Watch the embers dart and fly, join the stars up in the sky.
Build the fire bright, build the fire bright;
Build the fire bright, build the fire bright.

Raise your horn cups high; raise your horn cups high;
Raise your horn cups high; raise your horn cups high;
Praise the Mistress of the Stars, may her wisdom guide us far;
Praise the Mistress of the Stars, may her wisdom guide us far.
Raise your horn cups high; raise your horn cups high.
Raise your horn cups high; raise your horn cups high.

Hear the drum beats sound; hear the drum beats sound;
Hear the drum beats sound; hear the drum beats sound;
Dance and sing the night away; welcome in the break of day;
Dance and sing the night away; welcome in the break of day.
Hear the drum beats sound; hear the drum beats sound
Hear the drum beats sound; hear the drum beats sound.

See the sun rise, see the sun rise;
See the sun rise, see the sun rise.



Author notes

This song came to me on the plane trip home from a revisit to Ethiopia where I taught geography as a Peace Corps teacher in the 1960's. The images are from memories of traditional gatherings in the Gurage country in which homage is paid to the Old Gods. We built our own fire this time around, sharing wine and memories with old and new friends. The constellation Orion was directly overhead.

If you'd like to hear this poem song, here's a link to my recording: http://www.charlieipcar.com/lyrics/evening.htm

Charley Noble

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  • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
    October 12
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    Nice set of lyrics Charlie.
    Keep up the good work.
    Jim


    • Charley Noble silver member
      October 12
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      Thanks, Jim. I don't write a lot of poems but there was no stopping this one.

      Charley Noble


  • GothicFyre
    October 12
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    Charley I loved it, really beautiful and a really moving poem. I liked it, it was truly memorable.

    • Charley Noble silver member
      October 12
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      Lady Gothicka-

      Thanks so much! I think this poem/song would work well around any camp fire. I do need to add some drumming for the 4th verse. I already have a stash of honey wine for the horn cups!

      Cheerily,
      Charley Noble