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Grand Finale

Death is such
a femme fatale ...
if not a fire-escape to heaven,
then a snowslide to hell.

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Prompt SIX

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  • Topaze gold member
    October 24
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    Thank you for this lovely entry, my best wishes.


  • IronIcecream
    October 13

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    death may be a femme fatale
    however life is a femme absurde
    i think it's all fair


  • donnz
    October 12

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    'Death..."a femme fatale"? An interesting take' on the destroyer of life, a Vedic on 'Shiva.
    OR / 'comes as a thief in the night'... yeah, it fits. lol


  • Amera gold member
    October 12

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    Oh my! This isn't like your usual poetry at all but I really like it!

    Love,
    Amera♥

  • Bad Bill
    October 12

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    A clever and apt definition. Excellent.

    Good one,
    Bill


  • deercatcher
    October 12

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    When I nearly died, I lost my fear of death.
    I have since recovered...

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