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Caedes Cavum Moliri

what are words but
mere sounds and symbols
created by the elite
for the rest of the
selected world to
attempt to use correctly

and what are symbols
but nothing without someone there
without a poet
to string them together
in the hope that
someone might understand it

dearly beloved
we are gathered here today
to mourn the death
of lady art

gone are her followers
who devoted their lives
to the written word

gone are her lovers
creating art for beauty
and not for awards

technological advances
were meant to make it easier
for her word to rule the world

instead we are sitting here
listening to the last of her followers
all wanting to win that prize
and lose their soul in the process

so we bow our heads down in prayer
as we rest lady art again

ashes to ashes
lust to dust
true art to true god
as we say rest in peace

in pieces

in those fragments of lost poetry
forever and ever

a fucking men

Author notes

i performed this in the finals of my first poetry competition. i came fourth. and considering i typed this from memory... i'm pretty proud of it hehehe.

title: she who tries her utmost best to not be killed by the depression of others.
you see why i stuck with the latin?

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  • Over Zenith
    October 12

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    This is a really good write! Great job, I liked the funeral idea. And good idea sticking with the Latin title


  • Shaded DevilFox gold member
    October 12

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    Very thoughtful write love
    you do get more amazing as each day passes.


  • JinSays gold member
    October 12

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    fantastic.
    listed, and what a great read so early in the morning (it's 4:44 a.m., rise and shine)..
    I like the spoken...works.

    PS-the title.
    love,
    jin


  • NyteShade
    October 12

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    Ahh yeah the one who won insulted lady art lol. She shall smite the wicked and plunge them to the fiery pit lol. This should have came 1st or 2nd.

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