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Lone Child

verdant worlds
exist
behind the raindrops of her soul

A contest entry

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  • Malabu
    October 15, 2009

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    Lush worlds
    Two souls on a journey of wildflowers
    Summer rain
    For the heart to spill over
    These be my thoughts to your little wonderment
    Congrats on the bronze
    mal


  • Lavender Butterfly
    October 13, 2009
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    how beautiful... x


  • marandah gold member
    October 12, 2009

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    Thank you for 'verdant'

    I always look up new words. I am a verdant poet myself, and very much appreciate comments from other artists

    I love the 'short' poem contests. So much is conveyed in so few words - just as you have done here.

    Good luck in the contest.