I do not want to pretend,
I really do not want it to end,
You are worse than my ex friend.
I thought you were different,
But you are of the same species with the same trend.
You keep so much from me
But I will find out,eventually.
You are a ball of folded truths,
I thought
I thought
I knew you.
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Well, lemme see. This one's already a good piece. Change "worst " to "worse" since you're comparing only two people. I like how this piece ended. Of course, its power lies in brevity. You've done a good job here and only you will know how to revise this work XD
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Thank you
Thank you for the correction.I was upset and just wrote what popped out.Thank you again. -
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De nada. Glad to be of help in any way lol =]
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