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au revior

no time to bid goodbye

nor elbow grease to make life die

I’m alive but defunct

I’m in grieve and in flub

walls are moving

ready for wrecking

a heart of enmity

made life so chaffy

make one bite the dust

let one swing the shaft

then hear one say goodbye

-til ne’er, bon voyage

a tear for panegyric

every word sounds pallid

an eternity spent for pleasure

so astray came to schism…

Author notes

haha... don't know if these words/phrases are... new to you... i'm so sorry if they're not.. some simple definition follows:
*pan⋅e⋅gyr⋅ic  /ˌpænɪˈdʒɪrɪk, -ˈdʒaɪrɪk/  Show Spelled Pronunciation [pan-i-jir-ik, -jahy-rik]
–noun 1. a lofty oration or writing in praise of a person or thing; eulogy.
2. formal or elaborate praise.
*flub
-noun.. a blunder
*enmity
-typically mutual hatred or ill will
*bite the dust
- to suffer humiliation or defeat
- to come to an end
-to fall dead
*schism
-separation
*pallid
-pale
*defunct
-dead
*elbow grease
-effort
*grieve
-hurt
*astray
-off the desired path or course

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