Watered eye ...
bleed away
the sins of time ...
until tomorrow.
Author notes
10 words only from picture prompt as appears on contest page.
A contest entry
- picture prompt by Lavender Butterfly.
475 points, ended October 13, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I appreciate sincerity and type-o spotting over flattery
Comments
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Until tomorrow...nice ending for such a lovely poem! Yes, my friend I have missed your writes. Brings my heart happiness to read your words such as these once again!
~Sie
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Oh my, effective use of your ten words to enhance the prompt...Powerful...and congratulations on your honorable mention!
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love the ending... Packs a punch in few words... x
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There's much that can be said in few words, and I think you've done that rather well here.
I'm not sure if I'd use both sets of ellipses, but that's not for me to decide.
Man, do I love your work.
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bleed away
the sins of time ...
these are powerful lines here...
last line gives some hints of hope..nice read..
All the best in the contest...
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