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Grass is never green

Sheer diamond crystals
spill over lashes,
pregnant with emerald envy.

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  • Venugopal gold member
    October 31

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    pregnant with emerald envy.

    beautiful line

  • truly meaningful indeed... x


  • crazziladi
    October 12
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    Very powerful! great piece!


  • Errant Panther gold member
    October 12

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    a well crafted piece in only ten words that holds much depth of emotive content, well done and best wishes for the contest. thanks also for the kind comment on my entry.


  • chinmay
    October 12
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    Well crafted. All the best in the contest.


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    October 12

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    I read then looked at the image
    Hun this poem is beautifully written, sad and indepth
    looking into her eyes ...
    Brilliant
    gave emotions and feelings

    Best wishes Julie


  • marandah gold member
    October 12
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    I like this :)

    Good luck in the contest.

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