The die is cast...

Hold thou still the dogs of war
Keep fast your men at arms
For yet may come the sign of Peace
Like Venus with her charms

Behold proud Hector lies there dead
Fallen prey to Achilles hand
Fear not there comes the day alas
His blood will soak the sand

Loud lament will rend the air
When Troy's hero breathes his last
Weep not for Sparta's loyal son
For now the die is cast

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spacewench
October 17
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the last line is a clever ending sentance,sounds final andlinks it all together.

right now

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