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The Addiction

Puff, Puff, Puff,
It comes in to the lips
200 chemicals of death
A flavor that cant get away
Methanol so strong
Holding the cancer stick steady
Five years deducted of  life
Puff, Puff, Puff,
Another breathe stolen
Getting madder
And in anger
Taking the last puff, puff,
Lite another
One more closer to my death and very end
Take ten years off by one pack in
Puff, Puff, Puff,
I drop the cancer stick
It falls to the ground
Step on it
To put the fire out
No more puffs,
Breathe in and out
Fresh air
one, two, three.....
Smile
You did it
You quit
The addiction.....

Author notes

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hEsflDFgrHw
This is The Click Five, Quit, Quit, Quit music video off of you tube online.

Its my cigarette smoking addiction, I truly want to quit, AP writers and I am turning in to a monster if I don't quit, so I need everyone's help and support. Got a PT test coming up so send me messages of advice to quit my addiction readers. Smile always.

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  • Cherrylv
    October 12

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    Well done for writing this poem, it gives out a very important message!
    Good luck with giving up the drug Tiffany, be strong and you will make it!
    Great poem

    Cherry xxx