Grip me within your seduction,
Wildly I would venture and dream.
Sequester me as your lover,
In pure bliss I would yield to thee.
Hold me yearning for thy naked lips,
Your tongue in active foreplay.
Bite me to capture ecstasy,
Playing in joys with eternity.
Intimate points of no return;
Climaxing immortality?
Author notes
Picture Reference:-
http://www.mycoolespacio.com/
Prompt: Bite Me!
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A contest entry
- BITE ME! by Jade.Butterfly.
1600 points, ended October 13, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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it bit.....no near misses with this writ.....it is a definite fit for being bit......well penned hit......keep using your pens tip......love peace & harmny
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Yow!
"Bite me to capture ecstaasy"
I loved that line. SOunded so hot and tasty..
and this was short just the way i like it..
Thank you for entering and good luck
Mandi -
very imaginative!Good play of words!
Good Luck!
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