Every breathe I take
My thoughts of you never break
A warm sunny glow
I feel inside
But it is strange
As I have feared
I am happy, in a daze
Love I feel for you I have gave
It hurts in pain
Dying Inside
To never say the words so quick
Just like a flame gone out on a match stick
Only dying more and more
Cant go on not saying what i feel
When I know this is for real
The world disappears in a kiss
To leave me breathe less
My love eternal bliss
All the more
Dying Inside
To say the words
That will be my only cure
You hold my hand but never hearing the words
Together your arms around me make it fun
That never lies
But from the pain I will die
Inside out from the hurt
To never hearing the words
You have feelings for me
Don't know why you cant see
My love only grows in high hopes
But all the while
I cry inside like a child
Dying inside
To hear of your love and the heart I feel
But please dont tell me my feelings ain't real
Nothing of the words
Only you don't know
How my love of you dies with hopes
Dying inside...
Author notes
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zQls53Piuj0
This is Uncle Kracker, Follow Me, you tube video online to go with this poem
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XT01hV3Bl_g
This is David Lee Murphy, Dust on the Bottle, you tube video online to go with this poem
These videos go with these videos because it relates to the man I wrote the man poem about he is classical, older, dreamy, real world, down to earth, and I have strong feelings for him in every aspect. I been analyzing these feelings for 3 days at least, and I said in the poem it is weird but exciting and mind blowing to the point my thoughts and stomach are doing flips and flops. There is no cure for it, I am a drug to him of spontaneous woman and he a firecracker that makes me realize there are classical men out there to love a woman like me, when I about to believe they didn't exist, but I found one that does exist and cares about me. He got me roses a dozen and dove chocolate my ap readers to melt my heart. I don't care what faults he has I am stunned at how much emotion one man can let off in one day and not say a word. Lol. Well I hope you understand the fascination of this man , the poem and the videos. Keep writing all AP writers. oxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxxoxox to that man and all my AP friends!!!!
Hey, what do you think?
Comments
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This is a lovely tribute to the man you obviously feel deeply about. I'm sure he will love it.
Cherry
xxx
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wow iam speechless with this poem . i love every word written in this poem . when i was reading it i could feel the emotions coming out of this poem . "Only dying more and more
Cant go on not saying what i feel
When I know this is for real
The world disappears in a kiss
To leave me breathe less
My love eternal bliss
All the more
Dying Inside
To say the words
That will be my only cure
You hold my hand but never hearing the words
Together your arms around me make it fun
That never lies
But from the pain I will die
Inside out from the hurt
To never hearing the words
You have feelings for me
Don't know why you cant see
My love only grows in high hopes
But all the while
I cry inside like a child
Dying inside
To hear of your love and the heart I feel
But please dont tell me my feelings ain't real
Nothing of the words
Only you don't know
How my love of you dies with hopes
Dying inside..."
just wow ... lol i rely enjoyed reading this poem
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