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"Passionate Odyssey" (male pov)

Embracing my love,
Escorting her to exalation
As I make her mine.

My groin aches,
From her passionate grasp.
Where we both find solace the most.

A deep, intense place,
Where I guide us both....

Into ecstasy's madness.
Loves gladness.
I feel it flow within us.

Taught with anticipation.
I enter a slow journey....
Into the heart of her.

To envelop her orgasm with mine.
In rushing pulsating river.
Again..and again.

Till we sleep,
In calmer waters.
In passions heated exhaustion.
Within loves sweet embrace.

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