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Summer Sun

Waves crash on me like a breeze in the wind
The breeze smelt like cotton wool
Sand brushing against my feet
Loving the mid summer days upon us
I treasure these days until its gone

I walk along the beach
Stumbling around being free
With each hour goes by
I wish the day would never end.

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