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Dark Side Shining

You don't know what pain is until you face your worst enemy
The one that's hidden so deep inside yourself

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Written on 10th April at 18:13 GMT

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  • Kain
    June 9, 2005
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    I like this, Laura. I like it a lot. Inner demons are the hardest things to face. Have you faced yours? I have not faced mine....

  • Hells Angel 323
    April 14, 2004
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    oooh this is really interesting i really like how you wrote it, wow anywayz great job, keep up the great work and best of luck to you in the contest
    ~Jessi~

  • BlazingSwords
    April 11, 2004
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    hm, very thought-provoking. Well, seeing as I'm pretty sure I haven't faced this worst enemy yet, I hope I never do. The pain that I've known up until now is quite enough for me to get an inkling as to what pain is, lol.

    Very, very interesting. I really liked this.

    -Heather