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Bespeak Us

shadows fall across torn canvas, gold leaf
strange creatures glide by
with feline grace
not noticing the reflections
in the dark red fruit
hanging on the tree
whose pages speak them
along this auburn-enveloped
forest path
the wind blows cold, abstract
along the jagged edges
of cliffs of torn canvas
above this paint-splattered wood floor
of written wilderness

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